My Simple Bike
I have a simple bicycle in my life. I called my bike as the helping bike. It is like a friend for me, because many things that I have done with my bike. I often use it to go to my campus, my office, and do some recreations. It is a fixie bike. I got this bike from collecting my own money. It is a blue bike. Except me that use it, sometimes my sisters also use it. It becomes a adding transportation in my family. It is really a useful bike.
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